Oh, that red light groove.
Welcome to the land of
blood on blood
red, fresh blood to sait hungry demons.
Sex-starved, crazed
that red light groove is a madness, baby.
Take a good look
they prance the streets nude
covered in a red light
and their angels sport
bloody halos and carpart wings.














Comments
The diction was great, the words made the scene come alive! The flow wasokay, good line breaks, but the puncuation was a bit lacking. No much, but just a little!
Keep it up!
Greg!
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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...
-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
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